October Girl

Jessica "Chris!" I cried out. They attached something to my neck, I started to struggle. "There. a shock collar For Jalee." "Where is he?" I said. A shock of pain ...

***CRAP! what?lol**** I let her lay on my shoulder as she slept. She was so beautiful, especially as a bride, it turned me on. ^_^

Boys like girls -Thunder MCR-Helena Aiden-Moment but that's just me =)

Stephanie =)

Rogue (Robyn) I awoke at once , I was being draged by Adeline. "No, Adeline... Leave me." I said. "What? No." "Adeline.... Leave me. Leave me." I said. She started ...

I like this, it's like a poem to best friends. It's very true, nice avatar by the way ^_^ but anyways I think it should be a little longer, the ...

Rogue (Robyn) Most of my body was covered in blood, the royal red cascaded down my back, my wrists, my face, legs, arms. My make-up was smeared I laid on ...

Jessica They ripped off one wing I heard Chris scream. "AH SHIT!!!!" He yelled. Two other doctors came and took hold of my bed railing. "Where are you taking me? ...

10/10 I love Sweeney Todd!!!!

Marc Luna "Sybyla Luna... Has a ring to it." I smiled. She laughed. "It's late, you should get some sleep." I told her.

Marc Luna) What a weird feeling, I was getting married, to the most amazing woman in the world. The phone calls took a while, and when we boarded the plane ...

hmm, nice very nice. I like it, although I'm not much help for grammer errors or what goes where I'm just her to tell you, I liked it :D

Rogue (Robyn) I was stunned, and proud at the same time that he would say something like that. i was actually very proud of him. "I know you're not a ...

Jessica "Well what about you're father Jalee?" "Don't call me that." I glared. "What isn't that what your father use to call you? Little Jalee." He had an evil grin. ...

Aww! PA!!! I love this it's just so... awesome and so... you! -Max